句容碧桂园学校PYP
第一届中文征文比赛圆满落幕
The First Chinese Essay Contest in Jurong Country Garden School Was Successfully Closed
写作难不难？
Is it hard to write?
要论写作难不难，真要问问满心欢喜参加征文比赛的孩子们。他们在暑期认真准备，仔细观察，以真情实感记录下自己的暑期生活，以一串串动情的文字构筑暑期的美妙生活。第一届征文比赛获奖作品多达42篇，虽是初始，但成效不凡。小学部学子们都有一颗热爱创作的心！
We’d better to ask the children who are happy to participate in the essay contest whether writing is hard or not. They all record their own summer life with true feelings by carefully preparing and observing during the summer vocation. They pictured us their wonderful summer life. Although it’s the first time for the essay contest, we still obtain 42 works, which shows great creativity of PYP students.
写得好不好
Is the Writing good or not?
要问学生水平怎么样，孩子们会给你一个满意的答案。暑期大家都在玩，小学部的孩子是边玩边看边写，描绘栩栩如生，结构条理清晰。不信？请看下面出自选手们的金句：
The children will give you a satisfactory answer if you ask how the works are. Other kids might play all the summer, but we PYP kids are playing with observing. They describe well with right structure. Don’t you believe? Look at the following sentences from the players:
01
吴艾逸杨
“还没有等到冬天结束，便有许多的鸟儿在崇明岛安居乐业。它们叽叽喳喳得叫个不停，仿佛在贪恋着崇明岛上的美景，又好像在沉溺于拾掇留存的柿果。”
——G4B吴艾逸杨《柿子熟了》
“The winter is not over yet, there are many birds living in the Chongming Island. They sing all day long, as if in love with the beauty of Chongming beauty and the preserved persimmon.”
02
沙子钦
“长满青苔的河岸边忽然钻出一只蜗牛，悠闲的爬在地上，留下一丝丝粘液。他显得天真浪漫，或许是一个人稍微有点寂寞吧。”
——G5C沙子钦《峨眉山的第一天》
"Suddenly, a snail popped out of a river full of mossy river; he leisurely crawling on the ground and leaving a trace of silk mucus. He seemed naive and romantic, perhaps a little bit lonely.
这样灵动优美的句子,写得真叫好！
Such smart and beautiful sentences,written so well!
获奖名单：
The reward goes to:
特等奖：
G4B魏妗羽 G4B吴艾逸杨
一等奖：
G2A胡峻郗 G5C沙子钦 G5C王皓冉
二等奖：
G2A孙俊泽 G2B顾晋玮 G3A李一豪 G3D邵煜焓 G4D余健北 G5A李邺颖
三等奖：
G2A姬晨 G2C叶大榮 G3A鞠予晗
G3A潘彦霖 G3B朱箫羽 G3C高梓翔
G3C陆勃言 G4A刘羽芯 G4C张锦轩G5A杜庆宇 G5B王思瑶 G5B徐艺之
优秀奖：
G2B陈梓龙 G2B马骁宇 G2C沙莫凡G2C王乐存 G3B徐庆亮 G3C俞跃然
G3D徐天佑 G3D钟末煊 G4A张超凡G4A张溪纯 G4B范盛茗 G4C高煜文
G4C叶羽菲 G4D李怡晓 G4D王弈乐G5A田雨歆 G5B倪聿扬 G5C陈怡柔
G2D陈思涵
重大喜讯
部分获奖作文将被选登在10月13日的《扬子晚报》上，欢迎大家可以持续关注哦！
Great News
Some of the writings that won the rewards will be published on Yangtse Evening Post, and welcom to read them.
“片言可以明百意，坐驰可以役万里。”
快快拿起笔吧，泼墨挥毫！
留下你的笔迹，写下你的事迹，刻下你的心迹……
The words can take us to any place we want to go.
Just take your pen, leave your handwriting,
write down your deeds, and show your feelings...
每个人都可以是一位作家，
抒写独一无二的动人篇章。
Everyone can be a writer. Just do it!
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